Hi all, updated this piece of work and changed a few things like their proportions and stuff. Thanks to elsevilla and 2sday8 for their comments, hope it looks better now C&C welcome! and thanks for dropping by!
its interesting that you draw in what seems to be an obvious anime style, and yet you go for enormous amounts of detail, like the crease in teh wrist a and folds of the ridges of muscle on the legs. very well done
too much texture around the mid, they look like they have gills. Really well done the the detail, IM observant : What song is on the iPod Classic? and if this is how i preseve this.... isnt this train taking them to haven/hell kinda thing? so how did they die, because a lot of theories ive read about include what ever you died in is what you wear for the rest of your after life...
My only cc is that there should be more weight shown on their butts or more indention on the seats. Except for the girl in camo, she looks like she's lifting herself a bit with her hands. The only other bit of crit is that their belly buttons should be a bit lower. Otherwise, fantastic work, way better than anything I can do atm.
This image shocked me because I had a similar idea about the flying train. When I'm not writing seriously and I'm just imagining a story for fun sometimes I think of the harry potter world. Whenever I get to the train scene I always wonder why they kept it on tracks, if you can use magic it just doesn't make sense. So I always have my train fly. I also like the idea of different themes in the compartments. I imagine the two girls in this scene using magic to change the temperature, maybe even how the sunlight comes through the glass so that they could tan, and maybe there feet are cooling in water. And changing the seats and walls so that it looks like a beach house. I really liked this picture I hope you do more with those two characters. I like to see what they do next.
hey, the "Marionette" is in the mp4 (or something) ... she is a singer? vocaloid? hehe maybe thats why she has so much cds and sound equipments, and even cards from fans, a bock with lirycs? or she just like to read? and there is a picture of the "Knight Girl Joust" there too... o0
and in the "marionette" picture is a picture from "black record", its another singers? her's friend?
what is POZ in your wife's scooter? its some secret code? are you using those picturies to comun...
heheh just joking man, sorry , I love this stuff, you are amazing, crazy man, very good...I am your fan now heheheh xD
Did you major in Industrial Design, or study the drawing techniques of it? Just curious (I did), because of the really excellant line & color rendering of your man-made environmental elements (like the metal edging for the seats, and the iPod, and the shadows on things...)